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Reviews for Finishing the Portrait

By : inediblefrogs
  • From silentscream on July 16, 2009
    OMG I am giggling like a madwoman as I read this!
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  • From ANON - tukixoxo on April 30, 2009
    that was HOT!!!!!!
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on March 27, 2008
    I'm baaaack! You have great stories! Your wry humor has me laughing out loud with a truely wicked grin on my face! Oooooohhh a homicidal scary Raidou is soooooo hot!
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on February 03, 2008
    Ohhh...Raidou is scary, I like it!!! It makes him all the more HOT! Good story... oh, and I love the way all your stories can stand alone or be worked into a complete time line! Thanks for a great story!
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  • From gravybaby on November 28, 2007
    My heart is beating 100 miles an hour.
    That was so erotic and beautiful.
    I don't remember reading such wonderful love scene in a very long time.
    The whole story was great but that last chapter just blew me totally away!
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  • From Hestia on November 23, 2007
    Now how am I supposed to write Raidou for D/s Naruto after reading this??? Holy shit, Raidou is teh man, king of the doms!
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  • From Princessdragonsbane on September 16, 2007
    Fucking hot
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  • From kakashizgirl on August 21, 2007
    This was an AMAZING story! You write Sasuke x Sai sooooo deliciously sensual. I f***ing love it! They are hot together, and I never realized it until I read your work. Oh, the sexual tension between Genma and Sasuke...wow! Also, I was laughing my ass off regarding Kakashi and Gai's little contest. How original! OMG then Kakashi watching with his Sharingan...that was voyeurism at its finest! Also, the way you wove Kotetsu into the whole scenario, was funny as well as super freakin' HOT! You're AWESOME!
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  • From AnimeCookie on July 21, 2007
    I really liked the hotness, but Kotetsu was practically a one-man show! You must be a Kotetsu fan 'cuz he had some the funniest lines!

    Cookie~
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2007
    you needa write more damn that is fu**en hottttttttt!!!!! as holy monkey hell
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  • From gaara89 on July 20, 2007
    Nice job. Very sexy. I look forward to more from you.
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  • From manicandyshumway on July 18, 2007
    Oh oh oh! That was just perfect. There was just enough plot to make all that steamy sexyness plausable. And oh, man, was that smex steamy! I'm absolutely THRILLED that you're going to be writing a chapter for JDK!
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  • From ANON - Ebaka on July 17, 2007
    hmmm that was no mysterious "Anon", but non other than your perverted fan from y-gallery which is me)))
    aaand to some more constructive comments - boy, i loved that submissive and hungry sasuke you pictured)))
    i didn't quite get why his secret meeting with kakashi didn't result in his release - was he too frustrated after seeing kakashi lose to gai in thatcome-shooting competition? XD))) yeah, how can a great uchiha mess up with a loser - even the idea seems unbearable XD))))
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2007
    i was so looking forward to this chapter))) even though i kind of expected there would be no swearing kotetsu in it XD))) now i'm beginning to like raidou - who wouldn't like a bf, who gives you a fucking session with kakashi and sasuke as an anniversary present?...XD))) *drools to death*...
    i loved how you put the d/s philosophy into this chapter, and all the orders raidou was coming up with were just 100C hot XD))) to tally loved it ;)))
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on July 17, 2007
    HELLS YES.

    I am so insanely pleased that you finished this. You win, so hard, no shit. Hot, hot threesome... Raidou's controlling nature (in the bedroom, anyway) came across really well here, and made it sooooo freaking hot.

    ...My mind will be reviewing the image of Sasuke riding *just the head* for quite some time. I've go to say, my favorite Sasuke is cock-riding-Sasuke. And oh, ha ha, Kakashi's so selfish, not letting Sasuke get off...

    I love how you tied in Raidou's thoughts about Sasuke, his slight... grudge, maybe? against him for the actions that led to Genma being injured, and the bit of forgiveness that happened later.

    This was a great story, drooling-level sexiness, and cute and funny as well, even if it is total crack - it fills me with joy. Genma and Sasuke? What a game plan, indeed. ^_^

    KEEP WRITING PLZ.
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