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Reviews for Emotionally disturbed (Inuyasha,Sakura,and Naruto)

By : Slipknot666
  • From Breek on December 09, 2007
    ...a tensy bit confusing in format...
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  • From Blayze on May 27, 2007
    Giant Wall Of Text crits Blayze's brain for a fuckload of damage.
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  • From DrkLazarus on May 26, 2007
    .......

    Excuse me a moment, I need to restrain myself.

    .......

    Okay. I'm going to approach this politely.

    First, revise this. There is no question it needs it. Break up the block of text. Put quotation marks around speech, and start whole new paragraphs after speech. You need to make sure your formatting carries over in your revision, because it did not this time.

    I look forward to reading this when it is revised.

    ~LZ
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