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Reviews for Inverse Loving

By : AnansiScribe
  • From ANON - Modi on March 13, 2015
    Alright your story sounds good, but your formatting is some sort of funky and really needs to be fixed.
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  • From GenaricName on September 25, 2008
    Is this going to be one of the gender changing fics that ends in pregnancy?
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on July 30, 2008
    That Was Very...Unique.

    Keep It Up!
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  • From ANON - Cyraxr on July 17, 2007
    That was a fun read. The he/she thing was a little hard to follow but no real problems beyond that. I wonder how the other girl's night turned out?. Signed a fan of Hinata, Temari, and Kurenai.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2007
    Awesome story! All the "he"/"she" got confusing since it was used so much in a row, but that was an amazing story. Too bad you don't wanna add more. A threesome with them all in their normal forms or a 3-girl threesome would be awesome!!! XD
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  • From UzumakiIno on May 14, 2007
    Very nice. And you make a good point about polyamory at the end. Great fic, overall; I especially liked how it was Ino that invented the perverted jutsu.
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  • From aoshi4misao on May 13, 2007
    I liked this. This was a refreshing, different, entirely sexy take on Sak/Nar/Hin. Thank you for being twisted enough to think it, plan it, and share it. Very very sexy.
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  • From ANON - DrkLazarus on May 08, 2007
    Brava! I'd been thinking about something like this, but not to the degree you did it.

    Only complaint, portions of the fic that used the "him" "her" references a lot were difficult to follow smoothly. Not really sure how you could go about fixing that, perhaps just leave the quotes off and trust in the readers to figure it out, or use more proper names, like you did towards the end.

    ~Laz
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  • From ANON - Ladynaye on May 08, 2007
    More chapters please!
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