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Reviews for Survival of the Fittest

By : akashicrecord
  • From clandestine on July 24, 2007
    Aah, you discontinued this fic. Awesome, it's my fave - Uchiha/Saku smex with plot...
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  • From ANON - Cheetos on September 21, 2006
    Damn! It's so cruel yet so hot... and I'm addicted. I want more! More please!
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  • From ANON - Woah Nelly on September 21, 2006
    This has got to be the BEST PLOT EVER! Why didn't I read this sooner? ARG! It's your summary! Your summary doesn't give justice to the fic! I'm hooked! OMG! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - somma on September 10, 2006
    All I can say is wow. I so love this story!! I have never read a story where the Uchiha brothers were working together instead of fighting. You really got something phenomenal going here. I think you should keep going with the story. Look forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Pocky Lover on September 04, 2006
    Wow! What an unusal pairing! However, since I like all three characters this combo really works for me. Please update asap!
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  • From ANON - ZheM on August 30, 2006
    Evil Itachi...I love him! I loved this chapter but poor Kakashi, I love him too. I'm really curious to find out why Sasuke came back with Itachi instead of killing him. And what about Naruto? I'm looking forward to your next chapters.
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  • From ANON - mu on August 24, 2006
    Yay, one of the rare AU's wich aren't crap!
    Very good written and plot seems interesting.
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  • From ANON - Caramel on August 23, 2006
    love this story! hope u update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sam on August 23, 2006
    Aww! Poor Kakashi. :/ I really like this story though. It's really keeping my locked onto it. Please update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter. And if you're still taking votes, mine is for Sasuke. ^^
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  • From ANON - tsukashi on August 23, 2006
    I almost stopped reading, I thought it was a rape scene in the beginning. I like the style that you are going with here, it makes the reader think.

    A constructive suggestion - do away with the japanese. i.e. don't say nii-san and otosan, say brother. The use of Japanese words does not facilitate the story in any way, shape, or form, hence the suggestion.

    Interesting story, with lots of unexpected twists. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Yuiko on August 20, 2006
    This is a very interesting story, but I can't help but point out a little detail: "niisan" refers to someone's older brother, so when Itachi calls Sasuke "niisan" the word is not being used properly. This is just a little point that I hope you'll fix in later chapters because it is very confusing. :)
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  • From ANON - silver_geisha on August 20, 2006
    Good for you *heh*

    NOOOO Kakashi!!! *weep* I will miss the poor perverted weirdawesomedude ...
    Duuuddeee is Sasuke like .. being nice to Sakura (*gasp* teh horror)

    till next time (*sigh* ... I get sidetracked very easily ...) One last thing though, I really enjoyed the chapter.
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  • From ANON - raefire on August 20, 2006
    WoW! I can't wait to find out what happened to the others! Poor Kakashi! Your writing was very amazing.
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  • From ANON - mel on August 20, 2006
    I'm hooked. You definately need to continue this story. I have to know what happens next. PLease, Please keep writing. If you need any further encouragement I'll be glad to give you as much as you need. More please,please.
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  • From ANON - ZheM on August 19, 2006
    I hope you will consider making more of a story out of this or at least one more chapter. I really liked it and Sasuke coming back with Itachi was a real surprise.
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