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By : theyoungestuchiha
  • From ANON - DevilLived on June 27, 2006
    Okay, though it is true that some times parts of the story can get a tad confusing, not all of us are perfect. We all make mistakes and we all know we make them. I know that I never use a beta and I barely ever read over my fics, so don't worry about that. I don't use a beta because most of the people I know read my fic and I don't want it to be spoilt for them because they're looking out for grammer and spelling mistakes.

    You can make the humor funny when it's supposed to be and that's good. But you're right, it doesn't always have to be funny to us.

    Your story has flow, and some of your paragraphs are beautifully written adn that's what I love about this story. You really develop your characters and we always know how they're feeling and what they're thinking.

    You're doing a great job and I can't wait until the editing is finished. Sometimes I want to go back and fix things in my stories, but I always hesitate to because it was how I wrote them originally.

    You handled that flame very well, I applaud you. :D It is quite sad that this is the longest review I've ever given you. I should work on that.

    Till then, keep it up!

    DevilLived
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  • From ANON - Liah on June 24, 2006
    I actually had to read this twice to actually get it ^^; cos you write sex so ... poetical i guess XD; Hehe Awesome chapter tho ^^ I'ma so happy
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  • From ANON - NightsEnd on June 24, 2006
    "The hand at his cheek took a possessive, relieved hold on the back of the thin neck, steadying the trembling boy with the heartbeat he had barely managed to keep in control." That line was one of my favorites...possessiveness wins. Very sweet, too. (thumbs up)

    The lemon was great. That is one hell of a birthday present. And I love how Iruka has to guilt-trip Kakashi during their conversations whereas Sasuke barely has to do anything at all. XD

    Thanks for updating--I've been waiting. Good luck with the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on June 23, 2006
    Loved it, so glad you updated. I like how you made Sasuke's training schedual, it's interesting. The lemon was hot, great job!

    Anyways, can't wait till the next chapter so update soon!

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  • From ANON - NightsEnd on June 03, 2006
    Amazing, as always. I'm so glad I finally caught up with this story.

    "He was taking his Top Rookie back." Ah, man. It's lines like those that keep me coming back for new chapters. You're too good at this.

    I'll be here when you update again. You win. At everything. :-)

    -NightsEnd


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  • From ANON - Liah on May 29, 2006
    ZOMG *_* Well i got confused with the beginig at first but then got it eventually ^^; Cos i didn't get whether it was real or a dream...

    But great chapter! *_* I hope you update soon... i wanna see how Sasuke reacts now he's realised ^^; XD

    Liah xx
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on May 26, 2006
    Loved the chapter, great job. Neji's dream was very well done (drool). :D

    It took me a couple of seconds to realize what Kakashi was doing while Sasuke was having nightmares. Then I was like: Oh... OOohhh (insert drool). LOL

    Anyways, thinking of something more intelligent to say.... I like how you're making the characters your own, you really write them well. The scenes with Kakashi and Sasuke are always interesting and I think I enjoy them the most.

    Well, it's late here so I'm gonna wrap it up now. Update soon, alright?

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  • From ANON - DevilLived on May 18, 2006
    Awesome job, I loved the chapter.

    My favourite moments are the ones with Kakashi and Sasuke, I like how youw write them together. The scene with those two in this chapter while Sasuke was stuck in the hospital was very cuuute.

    Liked how you ended the chapter too.


    Update soon, alright?
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on April 24, 2006
    Yes! Another chapter. I liked how you wrote the part with the seal, it was beautifully written. Orochimaru is a pervy pedophile, mind you, then what does that make Kakashi? .... Well, at least Kakashi isn't planning on kidnapping our popular Uchiha!


    Loved the chapter and I can't wait till the next! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - annalise on April 24, 2006
    WoW. I just finished reading your whole story in one sitting and it was fantastic. Your use of language and story-telling is amazing and imagery provoking. I can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks...
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  • From ANON - Nanaka on April 22, 2006
    Love the story... can't wait to read more... keep them cumming
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