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By : hColleen
  • From Kaiyuke on April 15, 2008
    Really
    Baths, showers - they don't serve the purpose they're supposed to serve when you've got two hot boys in the vicinity.

    ;D

    (loves)
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  • From ANON - Eye of Ra on December 28, 2005
    aww. i liked it. y'know.. i went back and read this cause my friend JUST got me into Naruto. well. i watched like one episode cause it sounded cool. and i would have liked it better if i knew what was going on. i get it now! lol. so she got me to watch like four episodes and let me borrow the first two volumes of the manga. it's a start..but you have to start somewhere. ^^ so yes, now i can say i've read all of your fics on aff. LoL. cause i'm a dork like that. :D

    love ya. ^^


    Ra
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  • From ANON - Emily on October 22, 2005
    Wow, awesome fic. Your lemons are uber hot, and your fluffy stuff is really cute. Very well written, although I agree with a previous reviewer that they could have started out with something a bit less...I'm not even sure the word. A blowjob would have been nice, and fit in well for the first lemon.
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  • From ANON - Baka_Tsu on October 22, 2005
    Wow. Beautiful update. Love the impending emotions you focus on in your last update :D I'm definately hoping for another ^^
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  • From ANON - Hoshi on October 20, 2005
    No, I don't hate you... I just hate the teasing, but I also love the teasing...

    Wow did I confuse anyone else?
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  • From kaze on October 18, 2005
    What a yummy little story! As a avid Narusasu fan, I loved how Naruto seemed to have control even though at first he was on bottom (I hate how many writers portray bottoms as always 'uke'). Great job!
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  • From ANON - Dawnfire on October 16, 2005
    *drools at the thought of a uke Sasuke* wow, i always had Sasuke pegged as a seme, but hey, either way works! you did just fine, believe me. my only criticism isnt about your writing, its about the way that you answered reviews. and that is that there wasnt any room inbetween each response, so it was hard to distinguish were one response left of and the next began. other than that there was nothing wrong that i saw. SASUNARU ROCKS! ja
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  • From ANON - Ashley-san on October 16, 2005
    O.o *twitch* I think i need to open a window or something cuase that whole scene was HOT! Woo! I love this fiction and can't wait for more (please don't take that a harassment for chapters I hate when people do that to me so I'm not trying to make it seem like that's what I'm doind to you =^^=)
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  • From ANON - touya4me on October 15, 2005
    Mmmm, very scrumcious. And you did a very good job with the whole morning scene thing. It was very realistic and very well done. Can't wait for more of your work. But then, you already knew that, didn't you? ;)
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  • From ANON - Leasan on October 15, 2005
    SasUKE!!! Ohohoho... That was amazing!! I love this lemon, my god, it pushes all the right buttons!
    Awesome, I love the way they build the trust. The short panic in the morning made the later passion all the more delicious.
    I hope you'll update soon!!
    BTW What the hell is with this new layout on aff??? Can anyone explain it to me? 'Cause I hate it! Is it temporary? damn... I hope it is
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on October 14, 2005
    Wonderful chapter :D
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  • From ANON - KekkaiGuardian on October 11, 2005
    The first time I look at Naruto slash and I find my that my favorite YYH author also does Naruto. Small internet, ne? I've really enjoyed what you've written so far. I'd love to see another chapter. See you around at the cafe.
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  • From ANON - mimi on October 10, 2005
    Wow, wow, wow......*picking jaw up off the floor*, that was great...what can I say, I like my smut ^_^ I thought you kept them in character wonderfuly well, and I liked how they got together...great descriptions by the way *whew, is it hot in here or what? *cheeky grin* I can't wait to drool over...wait I mean read more!!!
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  • From ANON - Dawnfire on October 10, 2005
    *drools* wow, that was great!! i cant wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Reyn on October 10, 2005
    hmm...the one line that really blew me away was:

    "He brought his lips down, kissing the mark and around it as his own arms drew Sasuke closer to him. He could feel hands in his hair, holding him where he was, encouraging him to continue his exploration."

    I don't know why, but it did.
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