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Reviews for Damned Souls Infernal Rage, Lust and Desires

By : Gelionlegends
  • From ANON - Anon on October 01, 2007
    Not bad. A little confusing, but it's still good. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From thispuppybites on July 14, 2007
    You know a while ago I was asking myself "Why am I reading a Yuri or even why I had a Yuri in line to read?' Because its been forever sence I've looked at the storys I have lined up to read. So I went back to your main web page to read the sum. Found out why. It looked intresting but I don't read girlxgirl only guyxguy or guyxgirl I saw your story had other different froms of sex so I dicided to read it and skip the girlxgirl sence(sp). I hope there not important. Other then that I LOVED your story lol Sex deprived Naruto. Damn thats one I bet no one would come up with. and for so long I'm suprised he didn't hump everything in sight. lol
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  • From ANON - mangafreak on October 28, 2006
    this is a very good story. this is the kind of thing that can keep going for a while. so please put up more chapters. i NEED to know how it turns out
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  • From ANON - Josh on September 18, 2006
    I like the story and how you make him die is something of an unkown way but in any case how did Naruto die fighting Haku and what is going on... He is back in Konoha after two years of the fox has attacked and he is only two in that world.. Why is he going to find Hku and her Mom for.. She is too young if I am not mistaken... I hope to see an update from you soon.... What is he going to do to all the women after he gets them for himself.... E-mail me at JTB8834@aol.com
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  • From ANON - WS on August 03, 2006
    Um, ouch. my head hurts now, no offense, it's a good plot but you've made it way to confusing, you need to start a new paragraph when a character speaks or thinks to make it a little easier to read and understand.
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on July 12, 2006
    The idea and the way you wrote all of is very interesting and i really like to continue reading this. The lemon was good to but i think you could expand alot and with all the pairings i suppose youll get better with practice!
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  • From ANON - lordkelvin1337 on July 02, 2006
    its good, though you dont really explain how he "Died" on the bridge in wave country and yet comes back 2 years after he was born, this means all the things that he watched happening in the "pool" while he was in the deamon world havnt happened yet. but all in all its a good story with a good lemon in it... keep it up ^_^
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  • From ANON - hmr on January 17, 2006
    gREAT FIC! MORE!KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2005
    wow my friend was right this story does have a lot of potential please update soon this is a realy great begining
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2005
    please update this story is fantastic
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  • From ANON - firelord on December 08, 2005
    that was fantastic need to run your story thou a sell check thou i houp you plan to update soon
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  • From ANON - Steven on November 03, 2005
    Nice Story

    Update More PLZ
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  • From ANON - Maelas on October 26, 2005
    i hope you update soon i love your story good luck
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  • From ANON - me on October 14, 2005
    i hope u update again. if its naruankokurenai and perhaps even more grls it would be so awsome
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  • From ANON - blacky on June 02, 2005
    The whole fisting the anal thing bugged me out, but since it was a dream sequence its like .. *shrugs* Damn.. where are you?! Update!!!
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