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Reviews for Konoha Striptease Contest

By : ZiriOkamiotoko
  • From Svonbrand on March 24, 2007
    I have to admit, I really enjoy this story. It's got a nice humor to it, and is a very fun read : ) The premise is highly original, if lacking in plot, and my only complaint is that clothing/body descriptions are a bit confusing, they seem to be a bit jumbled. Other than that small complaint, I think this is a great fic. Keep up the good work : )
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  • From LazyNinjaLuvr on October 11, 2006
    I read this story on Livejournal at the konohasfinest community and I've got to say it's really inspired me to get back into writing again! If you don't mind (and you won't come after me on AFF or LJ for this) I'd like to borrow the striptease contest idea and warp it together with my sick little mind and a few OCs from myself and my friends. If you do have a problem with it, I will post it on my friends-only journal and not publish it on AFF.net. Please get back to me! And again, I absolutely LOVE this fic! It's genius!
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  • From ANON - Mika on October 01, 2006
    WOW!!! O_O..... this was written so welll.......... waiting for you to update.... hope you od soon!! =D
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  • From ANON - Josh on September 06, 2006
    I never seen something like that before. It isn't a striptease more of a sex tease. I hope Naruto and Hinata stays together. Kiba is like a brother to her if you look at it and how he is around her. Naruto is the one she is destined to be with in the end. Hope to see an update soon.
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  • From ANON - van...again on January 20, 2006
    Hey, I read this chapter again...DAMN IT! I can't get enough of it! This is really hot...
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  • From ANON - van on January 20, 2006
    That...was evil of you! Man what a cliffhanger! I wanted to see it all the way dude! Don't do that! I love this chapter! Woohoo! HOT!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2005
    ok. u REALLY need to get chap three out. too little tenten stuff on affnet~
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  • From ANON - blueinferno on August 21, 2005
    OMFG you are AWESOME! your a fantastic writer! omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!! i ADMIRE you!! LMAO ur..ur..words cant describe how good u r! *fans self* youve got to update SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!! the characters r SO in character!! by the time im finished reading al ur fics..il have no places left in my recommened reading! *wink* ur hot stuff!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 05, 2005
    update@
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  • From on February 05, 2005
    When's the third chapter going to come out?
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  • From on October 23, 2004
    Truly a great piece of work. Almost no out of character bits, and those that were out of character were probably just caused by my skewed perception of the characters. I have spoken with the author, and am pleased to announce that chapter 3 will be up soon.

    PS: Naruto + Hinata + Kiba = Dream Sandwich.
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  • From ANON - chibified kitsunes on September 23, 2004
    Woooah!! Now that was one chapter worth waiting for! That was freaking awesome! i loved how you incorporated Jiraiya into the fic.. Haha.. that was cool! and here i was thinking that backstage would be the end. But no! that was only the beginning! i loved this chapter from beginning to end! A great job, very well done and really good writing skills! Hmm... next will be Tenten right?? Maybe you could have Neji appear up on stage as well, and Lee if you want to... You could give him a makeover or something.. You're the author so hope to see another great work up soon!!
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on September 20, 2004
    Copy Ninja! Copy Ninja! Copy Ninja! I can't wait for the next chapter! Hurry and update! This last one was pretty awesome. I like to think that the last three just walked off-stage and are now finishing what they started (rather loudly) in Hinata's dressing room. Sounds pretty funny to me. Update soon!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on September 19, 2004
    Damn that was hot! Can't wait to read more, Did I read right, is there gonna be some Kakashi action in the next chappie? WooooHoooo!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - RFEC43 on September 19, 2004
    Can you say HHHHHHOT? Damn, Hinata is one lucky gal. Kiba and Naruto? Who could turn down that delicious sandwich.wr! wr! More flying speedos, more flying speedos! Can't wait ! (Kakashi!? ::gasp!::!!) Please update soon.
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