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Reviews for Fox's Dream

By : Mieren
  • From Leaprechaun1 on October 14, 2008
    I was just looking at your reviews, you have 7 or 8 requests for a prequal, please try it.
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on October 14, 2008
    I was just wondering if you could try writing what Naruto went thru before Kyuubi took a human form, just wondering how creative you can be about it. E-mail me with your answer.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2008
    (I review as I read.)

    I like the short first scene.
    Dream? Oh yeah, the title. . . . What? “Impatibratbrat”? What’s that mean? . . . . So this has happened before. . . . I like how I’ve got an idea of what’s going on, but I’m not quite sure. . . . Oh, you got a couple of typos in here. I don’t think it’s intentional or even unintentional. I think the computer went all wiggy when you posted this. The first few letters of a few words sort of stutter and cut the previous word off. I can assume that “Impatibratbrat” was supposed to be “Impatient brat”, “exudchakchakra” was “exuding chakra”, “canicompcompleting” was “canines completing”, and “cl han hand” was “clawed hand”. . . . Nice image of the Kyuubi’s human form. . . . So how come Kyuubi forced Naruto before? . . . . Heh. Kyuubi’s surprised that Naruto’s turned on, eh? Bet that hadn’t happened before. (Oh, and what do you know: I read the next line right after I said that. ^^;) . . . . So if Naruto had been crying before, how come the Kyuubi pushed him? . . . . I wonder why this time is different; if Kyuubi was so ruthless before, why not now? . . . . “amused to see the child writhe [. . .]” How old is Naruto in this? Is he still a child, or is he just a child compared to the demon? I guess it doesn’t really matter. . . . Heh. His dignity won’t allow him to purr in public. Cute. . . . “Same time tomorrow night?” How often does this happen? . . . . I wish you luck in getting top, Naruto. I’m rootin’ for ya.
    Sooo, did he not remember quite clearly? It said that “he was wondering how he could have enjoyed being forced.”

    Anyway, the story was interesting. I think it could’ve been hotter, though. (*smiles apologetically*)
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  • From shdwolf on June 02, 2007
    Great story, hope you continue with it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 07, 2006
    Naruto fucked by actually fox please!
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  • From ANON - DrakenD4 on October 30, 2006
    WOW! I LUV Kyuubi/Naruto there should be more fics about them, Anyway this was AWESOME
    Maybe you can continue? ^-^
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  • From ANON - Ignorant Boy on June 05, 2006
    Hah! Great fic, You should write a a continuation for this one, I don't know what about, but I'm sure you can do it. I liked the lemon, oh, oh! Idea! Idea! You know how Ino does her little mind dive, have her sneak into Naruto's house at night while he is sleeping. Make her curious to see what Naruto dreams about, and can somebody 'Threesome'?! Hah! Anyway, great fic, I hope that you take my idea to heart and write a continuation to "Fox's Dream" and hopefully takeing my idea to heart (That would be so cool >,
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on December 31, 2005
    nice me like you don't see to much of this
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  • From MysteryladyTx on October 26, 2005
    interesting...I liked it:D NICE:D
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  • From ANON - harryhollow on October 06, 2005
    Love it!! Hey, what if naruto falls for the fox and makes a deal with Kyuubi that would allow him to come out for a day or two with naruto steal there but he can't kill him cause their bond or maybe kyuubi starts to fall for naruto and want to protect him!! *sigh* still thinking sorry anyway I hope you come up with more chapters or sequel or even another story with kyuubi/naruto!!! *giggles*
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 02, 2005
    i like this alot.The foxes thoughtsare more erotic then rape
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  • From ANON - sd` on May 01, 2005
    Prequel, plz.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 29, 2005
    Good! I agee, prequel pleasse!
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  • From ANON - dogmatix on January 15, 2005
    ...it wasn't badly written or anything, but... I think Naruto would have been more affected (read: traumatized out of his mind) by forced sex with an evil fox demon, especially since you established that Naruto cried and protested on previous occaisions. Which is why Naruto's relatively calm acceptance of Kyuubi in ~any~ form seems very, very unrealistic and out of character.
    The concept behind the story is extremely interesting though, and if you ever write more NarutoxKyuubi I will definitely be reading it. *g*
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  • From ANON - Shady on January 13, 2005
    Excellent. Prequel PLEASE.

    (Kinky, I know.)
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