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Reviews for An Upward Decent

By : LemonGoddess
  • From ANON - MasterLenx on September 30, 2006
    NOOO!!! *Smiles* This is a cool story! Well, update soon so I can compliment u again k? Bye!
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  • From crowincarnate on August 08, 2005
    *Gasp*!!! that was the best!! I
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  • From ANON - alisha on June 27, 2005
    OOOO!! Very lovely kakashi and iruka fanfiction, it was really sweet and had great imagry, I really really really loved it!!!! ^^ Thanks so much for writing it! :D
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  • From on August 26, 2004
    W00T!! I luv this fic!! Excellent!!

    Hehe, Kakashi always pushin Iruka's buttons...

    ^^ Hope to see more KakaIru fics!!

    Kaiyuga ^..^
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  • From on August 26, 2004
    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! KAKASHI'S NOT DEAD!!!!! I'd have to kill u if he was XP. But anywho, I love this fanfic, I'm amazed FF,net won't accept it...pussies. *ERHEM* But anyway, tis so cool that Iruka goes all ANBU to find Kakashi! Hehehehe, must read on!

    Sugoi! Continue, onegai?!

    Kai ^..^
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  • From ANON - anime_bishounen_stalker on August 19, 2004
    Oh my! this is quite a fic! (tee hee hee) I think this fic has good overall flow and is very entertaining. you did well building up to *ahem* certain scenes and I like the way you portrayed the main characters (as in generally keeping them close to the original works) and their relationship. It had credibility (which is good!) and there were only actually a couple things that I had a problem with from a technical standpoint. asidom mom minor spelling/grammer mistakes (which nobody really cares about, come on now! its fanfiction!) Okay, when I read this fic, I was kind of left wondering how Kakashi came to be so infuatuated with Iruka. It seemed a little abrupt, as though he had just picked Iruka randomly. Perhaps a paragraph explaining that Kakashi had been eyeing Iruka for a while now and maybe even how they met or something to that effect. just a thought ;) not that important though. the second thing is I kept wondering how no one really seemed surprised that they were going together. For example, how did the Hokage know that Iruka and Kakashi were in a relationship, or that he would be staying at Kakashi's place? , again just a sidenote or an extra sentence explaining that he did know, for whatever reason would suffice. Lastly, (and I hope I'm not being too critical because I really did like this fic) when Iruka goes to find Kakashi, and he goes into the first guy's house, following the rumor that someone from his village had been taken prisonor, he sees that it is not Kakashi, and yet he still leaves the guy there. :S I figured he would atleast rescue the guy seeing as they are from the same town...
    In conclusion, I really liked your fic and I thought it was cute and fun. please continue writing and way to go.
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on July 01, 2004
    A very sweet story that ran a whole range of emotions and feelings. Nice job.

    cdk
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