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  • From lara5170 on September 29, 2016

    I loved the 'I Got Him First'


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  • From lara5170 on September 29, 2016

    This was good but I wish it was longer. Thank you


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  • From Leeana69 on October 02, 2008
    Awww, you should write a follow up to this, even if it's just a one shot.
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  • From on June 22, 2008
    YAH! Abo-so-lut-ly a-dor-a-ble! Go Kyuubi! Hehe. I like how you put that sneezing thing in there, 'cause that happens in the anime also. It always makes me laugh when I see that someone else used it...*chuckle*
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  • From Vague on February 25, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

    I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.

    Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.

    All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

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  • From MasterofPie on February 07, 2008
    i love your story oh so much!!
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  • From serenagold on November 28, 2007
    Squeee!~~~


    The ending was hilarious! I love the jealous Sasuke and the sneering in triumph Kyuubi. ^^ hehehhee

    Everything about this story was great. Favorite part? Hmm.. lets see... its gotta be: "I'm half demon now" "So what! Who gave you a hickey?!" heheheheh Fantastic.
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  • From Vague on April 24, 2007
    Hello Author,
    I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

    About the Archive:
    The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

    Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=17. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.

    Vague
    Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
    http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
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  • From ANON - ryuuta on January 12, 2007
    This was fun! Is there going to be a sequel?
    I enjoyed that you did not make Kyuubi overly nice.
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  • From ANON - kawaiicrimsonkitsune on August 10, 2006
    OMG! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING A KYUUBI/NARUTO FIC! *cheers for your greatness* My latest yaoi couple obsession is kyuubi/naruto those kinds of storys are hard to find. So PLEASE PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! I'D BE VERY HAPPY AND IF YOU DO HAVE KYUUBI AND NARUTO TOGETHER! AND YOU ARE GOD!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ignorant Boy on May 30, 2006
    Great fic, but you need to write a a continuation of this story. Have Kyuubi come and visit Konoha and, well I guess you can say "molest" him slightly in front of all of his friends, Sakura, Hinata (she wouldn't be be to happy about that, LOL), Tsunde, ect. Oh, also have Naruto and Sakura dating, now THAT would make the 'Kyuubi molesting Naruto' senerio much funnier.

    Now that the praise is over, time for me to do my sacred duty as a reviewer. I found that in quite a few of your chapters, I had to scroll constantly to read the next few words in each line of every paragraph. I found that it was quite an eye-sore sometimes, and it did (from my POV) detract from the overall flow of the story. I would find my reading one sentence, then have to scroll over to read the rest of the words, and THEN have to scroll back, very annoying. (SORRY if that was a bit harsh, just one of my pet peeves, can't really fix those darned pet peeves, ya know? ^-^) Also, I found that sometimes a few of the beginng letters of some of the words were repeated, for example, "Kyu Kyuubi stared at *blank*" Quite a few of those in there.

    Anway, I give you a 10/10 for orignality, 8/10 for grammer and font, 9/10 for fun factor, and overall 10/10 despite the grammatical errors, I really love this story a lot, PLEASE write a contiuation. ALSO, PLEASE give Kyuubi back his fuzzy ears, and at LEAST one fuzzy tail! Find some way he regains some of his more demon attributes, Kyuubi just ain't Kyuubi without the fuzzy ears and tail. Could you do that for a fan? Please write a continuation of this story! (If you could use some of my ideas in your fic that would be awesome!)

    Your fan,
    Ignorant Boy

    ~"They say ignorance is bliss, hmpf, they don't know the half of it." TM

    Quote property of Ignorant Boy, any misuse of this quote will lead to action taken under
    the direct authority of the Racoon City Police Department and S.T.A.R.S (Special Tactics and Rescue Services)

    Racoon City and S.T.A.R.S don't belong to me.

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  • From ANON - harryhollow on October 07, 2005
    squel squel please I hope you continue with kyuubi snecking into naruto's room and heeheehee.... surprising him with alittle action heeheehee....please pretty please e-mail me if you do!! I will say this *wow* this is number one of the best naruto/kyuubi!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Erika on August 21, 2005
    oh man that was an AWESOME chapter...oh man that was just GREAT!!!
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  • From ANON - Erika on August 21, 2005
    NO WAY!!! ORANGE?! ok that was AWESOME but oh man what timing, YIKES....that was GREAT:D
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  • From ANON - hinshihoushi on May 21, 2005
    Really really enjoyed this. Hope you write another Naruto fic in the future.
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