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Reviews for The Butterfly

By : tealeaf
  • From Genkochan on August 02, 2009
    I read this story years ago, before we had even heard of Akatsuki in the manga. I read it and absolutely adored it. I bookmarked it, then we were forced to wipe our computer. Since then I had been searching for it on and off when I had extra time. I just rediscovered it recently and reread it. I enjoyed it more this time than I did the first. Thank you for writing this amazing story and posting it for others to read.
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  • From EnchantedFaery on September 11, 2007
    very good story! Kinda wish it didn't have to end here,but that's the way it is! Thanks for sharing this with us!

    EF
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  • From EnchantedFaery on September 11, 2007
    WOW! I must say, this story is very good...I'm only at chapter 3 and you ACTUALLY made me cry! It takes a lot to do that! I've read ones that made my eyes water, but this one actually caused tears to fall...so in my book, this is an excellent story so far. One thing though, I noticed alot of typo's in the first three chapters. I'm not sure if it happens when you post it or what, but if you don't have a beta u might wanna consider one, if you have one then it doesn't hurt to have another one, anyway, I am looking forward to reading more!

    EF
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  • From elaynabrooks on June 05, 2007
    The story was good. I wasn't into it at first, but it hooked me. The only thing I didn't like about the story was that the ending seemed....rushed. There are still unanswered questions, the main one being that there was obviously a little more something between Kakashi and Sakura, so why wasn't it explained in slightly more detail? Also, there are a lot of broken html codes scattered throughout the story...could you fix those? It might be a better read for those who wish to in the future.
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  • From ANON - Ishanatur on July 13, 2006
    oh wow i dont know how long ago you wrote this but its really good i actually cried (first time crying for a fanfiction) an thats just on chapter three im almost afraid to go on
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  • From ANON - slimcascade on January 09, 2006
    I applaud you. I loved it.
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  • From ANON - cateye91 on December 11, 2005
    k, i tried 2 put my e-mail up in my last review but my comp's gay and it said it was hidden...so here it is if u can send the pic 2 me...cateye1014@juno.com sankys! lol...
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  • From ANON - cateye91 on December 11, 2005
    ooo my god! that was sooo sad! i swear i cried in the beginning...probably cuz i partly feel like that alot...o well...i luv the whole butterfly thing...and i wanted 2 see the pic on mediaminer.org but it wouldn't go for me and when i looked at ur pix it said it wasn't in there...so i was wonderin if u could like e-mail it 2 me cuz i wanted 2 see it really badly! lol...but i truly love this story...it's sad and happy and absolutely perfect...great job! ^_^
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  • From ANON - padoopadoop on October 27, 2005
    I just finished reading "The Butterfly" all in one fell swoop and have to say I thoroughly enjoyed it. It is not a story that I have seen or thought of before for the Naruto universe. I think you did an excellent job with it. There were occasional typos (some I'm sure were due to AFF rather than you), but overall spelling and grammar were very good. I look forward to reading other stories from you.

    Thanks again!
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  • From ANON - krickets on October 21, 2005
    kawaiii!!! i spent the whole day reading the whole thing! and i even cried when AFF was down for an hour!
    yes very nice i like it

    especially that line "i gave you better reasons to stay" ha ha ha i LOVED that!
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on August 06, 2005
    Magnificent! Encore! Encore!
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on August 06, 2005
    I think that's the first SasuSaku lemon I read that isn't a result of sasuke's agenda to rstore his clan, or rape, or some such. Thank goodness! Great morning after, by the way. ^_~
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on August 06, 2005
    LOL! Sasuke's Ego and Conscience are effin' crazy!
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on August 06, 2005
    Happy drunks! Yay! Lovely bit of writing there.
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  • From ANON - Kireiko on May 02, 2005
    Wow. That is one good read that you have posted up here. I enjoyed your writing style (even if it was a bit spotted with spelling errors and mistakes - sorry!!) I loved the eventual pairing, even if i did think - ack. not another Kaka-Saku pairing!! But seriously, nice piece, definitely well worth the read in the end! Good job. (Although your ending was a bit simple, if not abrupt, in my honest opinion *wink* I am glad at the way you did it though.... )

    Hope to see more from you.
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