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Reviews for The Cost of Fair Play

By : Pesha
  • From ANON - fakjskd on July 07, 2014
    You are now cursed. You must send this on or you will be killed. Tonight at 12:00am, by Bloody Mary. This is no joke. So don't think you can quickly get out of it and delete it now because Bloody Mary will come to you if you do not send this on. She will slit your throat and your wrists and pull your eyeballs out with a fork. And then hang your dead corpse in your bedroom cupboard or put you under your bed. What's your parents going to do when they find you dead? Won't be funny then, will it? Don't think this is a fake and it's all put on to scare you because your wrong, so very wrong. Want to hear of some of the sad, sad people who lost their lives or have been seriously hurt by this email?

    CASE ONE -
    Annalise [Surname Removed] :She got this email. Rubbish she thought. She deleted it. And now, Annalise dead.

    CASE TWO -
    Louise [Surname Removed]: She sent this to only 4 people and when she woke up in the morning her wrists had deep lacerations on each. Luckily there was no pain felt, though she is scarred for life.

    CASE THREE -
    Thomas [Surname Removed]: He sent this to 5 people. Big mistake. The night Thomas was lying in his bed watching T.V. The clock shows '12:01am'. The T.V misteriously flickered off and Thomas's bedroom lamp flashed on and off several times. It went pitch black, Thomas looked to the left of him and there she was, Bloody Mary standing in white rags. Blood everywhere with a knife in her hand then disappeared. The biggest fright of Thomas's life.

    Warning... NEVER look in a mirror and repeat -'Bloody Mary.Bloody Mary.' Bloody Mary... I KILLED YOUR SON' Is it the end for you tonight! YOU ARE NOW CURSED

    We strongly advise you to send this email on. It is seriously NO JOKE. We don't want to see another life wasted. ITS YOUR CHOICE... WANNA DIE TONIGHT? If you send this email to...

    NO PEOPLE - You're going to die.

    1-5 PEOPLE - You're going to either get hurt or get the biggest fright of your life.

    5-15 PEOPLE - You will bring your family bad luck and someone close to you will die.

    15 -25 OR MORE PEOPLE - You are safe from Bloody Mary
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  • From ANON - polar bear queen on September 28, 2006
    haunting and delightful. i've read this again and again and i never get tired of it.
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  • From ANON - Sai on February 03, 2006
    Ohh the angst. why do I love it so? Great writing, this is my fave of all your stories. Maybe you will make it a story, hm? ^^
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  • From ANON - Hezzer on October 01, 2005
    ...How could I have not noticed this fic?! I'm so glad I found it!

    Your characters played their roles very well. Good job!
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on February 20, 2005
    Oh. My. God. That....was truely a work of art.......I mean......WOW!!! That was soooooo good!!! -Very- well done, and totally creative -- way to go!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work, and feel free to write a sequel!!! Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - tess on April 22, 2004
    must make a continueation (however you spell it) must add!!!
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  • From ANON - watermelon-gal on April 12, 2004
    wtf
    NO
    THATS NOT RITE
    no
    u can't end it there!
    well it was a REALLY good story but u can't seriously end it there
    please PLEASE write a sequel?
    please?

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  • From ANON - Sdihypervelosty on April 06, 2004
    I loved it, that's all I could say
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  • From ANON - SSB on April 05, 2004
    Very smutty. I normally don't lextrextreme smut, but I do feel this acty hay had a good...plot? This could actually continue if you wanted. But...you don't have to listen to me. You are the writer.
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  • From ANON - RikuNghts (to lazy to sign in) on April 04, 2004
    Ooh! Great job. Very sexy and emotional. And we all know Sasuke loves him too. He just won't admit it. ^_^ Nice job.
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  • From ANON - Ookima on April 04, 2004
    there's more chapters to come right?
    because I hope Sasuke snaps out of it and doens't use poor Naruto
    poor little kie
    pe
    please let me know if this was a one shot only ne?
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  • From ANON - Suukou (too lazy to sign in) on April 04, 2004
    *Squeeeeeee* Pesha!! You came to aff.net! Now we can spread the love that is Naruto and Yaoi.

    And oh, let me just tell you again how much this story makes me purr. I think I'm cheating 'cause I've already lauded you once before about this, but I'll do it again. *sticks out tongue in a fashion eerily similar to Naruto*

    I *love* that bastard Sasuke.

    And the angst... you made him vulnerable without compromising his atti, an, and I love love love this.

    I wast tst thinking... what do I have to do to make you continue this? *eg*
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