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Reviews for Lemony humor in the bathouse

By : Aphrodisiac
  • From ANON - 2156 on July 07, 2014
    You are now cursed. You must send this on or you will be killed. Tonight at 12:00am, by Bloody Mary. This is no joke. So don't think you can quickly get out of it and delete it now because Bloody Mary will come to you if you do not send this on. She will slit your throat and your wrists and pull your eyeballs out with a fork. And then hang your dead corpse in your bedroom cupboard or put you under your bed. What's your parents going to do when they find you dead? Won't be funny then, will it? Don't think this is a fake and it's all put on to scare you because your wrong, so very wrong. Want to hear of some of the sad, sad people who lost their lives or have been seriously hurt by this email?

    CASE ONE -
    Annalise [Surname Removed] :She got this email. Rubbish she thought. She deleted it. And now, Annalise dead.

    CASE TWO -
    Louise [Surname Removed]: She sent this to only 4 people and when she woke up in the morning her wrists had deep lacerations on each. Luckily there was no pain felt, though she is scarred for life.

    CASE THREE -
    Thomas [Surname Removed]: He sent this to 5 people. Big mistake. The night Thomas was lying in his bed watching T.V. The clock shows '12:01am'. The T.V misteriously flickered off and Thomas's bedroom lamp flashed on and off several times. It went pitch black, Thomas looked to the left of him and there she was, Bloody Mary standing in white rags. Blood everywhere with a knife in her hand then disappeared. The biggest fright of Thomas's life.

    Warning... NEVER look in a mirror and repeat -'Bloody Mary.Bloody Mary.' Bloody Mary... I KILLED YOUR SON' Is it the end for you tonight! YOU ARE NOW CURSED

    We strongly advise you to send this email on. It is seriously NO JOKE. We don't want to see another life wasted. ITS YOUR CHOICE... WANNA DIE TONIGHT? If you send this email to...

    NO PEOPLE - You're going to die.

    1-5 PEOPLE - You're going to either get hurt or get the biggest fright of your life.

    5-15 PEOPLE - You will bring your family bad luck and someone close to you will die.

    15 -25 OR MORE PEOPLE - You are safe from Bloody Mary
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  • From Vague on February 24, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

    I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.

    Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.

    All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

    Emi Baptiste
    Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.

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  • From ANON - llewellynprince on August 15, 2006
    loved the Iruka seme, please write more.
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  • From ANON - puppy on February 01, 2006
    funny i liked the ending
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  • From ANON - kakiru (again..) on July 31, 2005
    I HATE FLAMERS! I ABSOLUTELY HATE THE FLAMERS OF THIS STORY! IT WAS SO FUNNY AND ALL! DO YOU KNOW WHAT FLAMERS CAN DO? THEY COULD TRY TO FIND THEIR HUMOR (IF THEY HAD ONE..) AND TAKE THIS AS A HUMORISTIC STORY! I KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO KEEP THEM ON CHARECTER SO DON'T YOU TELL HOW OTHERS WOULD WRITE THEIR STORIES! WORLD NEEDS FANFICTIONS! (OR I NEED THEM MORE TO KEEP MY PERVETED MIND ON CONTROLL ^-^U) AND IT'S A FANFICTION-STORY! SO THE WRITER CAN MAKE THEM AS UNCHARECTER AS HE/SHE WANTS! now i'm going to drink something hot,my voice is fading away..
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  • From ANON - kakiru on July 31, 2005
    Fantastic! absolutely fantastic! Me like the humor,me like the lemon(it took a moment to understand that iru-chan wasa seme...), ME LIKE THE WHOLE STORY!
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  • From ANON - simply_disgusted on February 19, 2005
    you totally destroyed that comic...
    the artwork is so beautiful and the characters actually stay true to what the author dictates
    you are the worst plagiarist i've ever come across on adult fan fiction...
    do you pay people to write your homework too?
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  • From ANON - Bluelady on January 09, 2005
    Oh gods! Uke Kakashi! I love you!!!!!! *glomp* but i really wanted to read those other 2 times *pout*

    *cough* anyways, any chance of that sequel ;)
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  • From on August 16, 2004
    P.S. Screw Chtuhnu. If u need a Beta reader for future fics, I'm open for the vacancy. ^^ I hate flamers, they should burn. (lol, get it? heh heh...okees, bad pun) ^^; Continue and prosper, O learning one!

    Kai >^..^
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  • From on August 16, 2004
    XD so kawaii! Nice description of their emotions and feelings ! Very good job ^^ and anywho, I'm a KakaIru fan, so naturally, I was attracted to this one. Kakashi and Iruka...XD

    Hope to see that sequel u mentioned!

    Kai >^..^
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  • From ANON - Anyacatt on April 12, 2004
    Ooh! I like! I want to sequal please! plretty pretty pretty pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaase?? Hee hee! maybe with Kakashi on top ne?
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  • From ANON - Sausweet on March 25, 2004
    I saw the manga this story came from. I liked it in manga form, but because i dont speak japanese this story worked as a good translation. thanks!
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  • From ANON - Chtuhnu on March 23, 2004
    I'm going to be honest with you. This was utter and horrid crap. I believe my eyes are still bleeding.

    You've managed to completely forget the character's personalities, your grammar is something from another planet and you've got no structure what so ever in this piece of verbal vomit you've the guts to call a fic. This is the stuff that's supposed to stay on your hard-drive and never ever to be put on the net. Please do so in the future.

    Raping the characters and ignoring even the most basic routines the characters have in their manners and persons is something I never thought someone would be able to do. Please, the next time you post something learn how to use line breaks and a basic structure in your text. I don't know what kind of an idiot would enjoy this kind of shit. Because, I wont' lie to you, that's what it is. Some fangirl hacking away at her favorite characters with no sense of ambtion or respect for them.

    Go learn English and mature, you can even try to add insight into your writing. I hated this one, I really did. And I know I'm taking the time to tell you this, and you've undoubtedly have a few things to say about that; but do understand that I don't know you personally, but judging by the way you write you're nothing short of a monkey with a keyboard. But foremost, get your fact straight before you start writing about anything.

    You can take this all in your stride and try to develop as a writer.
    Or you can stop infecting people with vomit like this.
    The choice is yours and you can so nothing to change the way I think.
    If you plan to keep on writing, produce something actually worth the read and I might re-think my opinion.

    Sincerely flaming you,
    Chtuhnu
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  • From ANON - jodlet on March 02, 2004
    i found the comic!! it's fun to read.....but your story made my reading japenese problem go!
    ht
    http://www.eonet.ne.jp/~egomania/pict.html
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  • From ANON - jodlet on March 02, 2004
    it was really good......but i read a comic with that storyline!!!!..........coincedance?
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