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Reviews for Division

By : Sugah
  • From ANON - Test on February 28, 2016
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  • From bloodshound on August 30, 2010
    good grief what a mess. Those poor guys and damn those stupid fan girls. May they rot.
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  • From Rikuhikari on July 17, 2009
    please continue I love sasu/kyubi paring its so hard to find and yours its really nice
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  • From Jiro on April 20, 2008
    I absolutely LOVE this story. It's one of my all time favorite Naruto fanfics. Even though the fic seems abandoned, I'm still curious as to why Anbu would let the swarm of antagonistic fangirls into the compound in the first place. It seems an unstable Kyuubi/Naruto + antagonism = Kahona explodes. Or something like that. So why allow the situation to escalate. And why wouldn't Sasuke, who knows the severity of the situtation, resort to violence to get them to back off (at least a visual demonstaration of violence). Even ninja fangirls are (supposedly) no match for Anbu. Hence my confusion. Still, it's a good catalyst. I love your diction, by the way. Wonderful narrative voice ^_^
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  • From ANON - Bloody A on December 12, 2006
    God this story is so good. I don't know if you'll even get this reply but it's awesome. It's a shame you never finished it.
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  • From Volett on December 04, 2006
    Ohhhh, lovely story. I wish you'd finished it, pity it appears abandoned. Anyhow, it's rare to find something that has the appearance of plot AND decent sex scenes. Splitting up the Kyuubi and Naruto like that, very good thinking, there's a ton of potential for character and story development from that idea alone. I like your take on Sasuke as a character, as well as how Naruto would be without the Kyuubi's influence. How should I say this, there's room for improvement, but you already appear to be lot more advanced than most fanfic authors I come across.
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  • From ANON - galerian57 on June 01, 2006
    this is such a cool story. I really like it so please continue soon.
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  • From ANON - demonesse on January 30, 2006
    so im thinking that i've never read this chapter 7 before. and since i was going through all your fics at the moment, i might as well go through this one.

    amazing writing as usual. the pacing, the annoying fangirls, the gut wrenching character pain i can just FEEEEL is coming on. (but maybe its because i'm listening to weezer as i read your fic)

    i like!
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  • From ANON - Lichan on January 21, 2006
    Will you ever continue this. I love this story so much even after all this time.
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  • From ANON - ZoeyJade on January 15, 2006
    OMG! OMG! Oh my fucking GOD!! I just pray that you get around to updating this story. So good so good! I want to know what happens next. I love love love your portrayal of Kyuubi. So great. I think you're doing a wonderful job and I loved the lemon and I want more! Ugh I'm going to be so disappointed if you don't update this....
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  • From ANON - LoathedWolfSpirit on January 08, 2006
    You can't, just can't leave it there. This is a really captivating and in character story! It defienetly one of the best that I have ever read. There are a few words here and there are are missing or mixed together but the plot and content more then make up for it. Even if you may not continue this I want to say that it's a wonderful and amazing fan fic. I really adore all your work.
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  • From ANON - kurisupi on December 21, 2005
    This is a good slice of... crack.
    Please finish!!!! ;.; i will cry like a girl if you dont XD
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  • From ANON - fiberchick#7 on December 17, 2005
    I'm just writing to let you know people are still reading this fic, since it looks like it may never be finished. That would be a shame since it's such a lovely little story. I like how it teeters between humor and angst. Sasuke acting the mother hen is just sort of funny. Especially when in the next moment he's worrying over what to do about Kyuubi's behavior. The interaction of Naruto and Kyuubi is particularly sweet and it's interesting how much the fox listens to the boy. Sasuke's a little OOC in this, but considering all the things that DIDN't happen, I can believe it. "Innocent" Naruto is adorable and Kyuubi has become my favorite character in this fic. I also like that the "division" was an apparent accident, and not some plot by Orochimaru or Itachi, allowing the focus to be on the beauitful dynamic in the relationship of Naruto, Sasuke, and Kyubi. While it seems this will probably never be complete, I'm still hoping you may decide to return to it so I can find out what happens. I've read a lot of fanfiction, and this is one of my favorites.
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  • From ANON - V on December 07, 2005
    No updates since 2004? Was I reading that correctly? Gah! I want more! *Goes on to read more of your stuff* Stayed up half the night just to finish this, great job, and I hope Naruto and Sasuke work out ok... even if Kyubi has to get rough ^_^
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  • From ANON - nikkofish on October 23, 2005
    I really really love this story. I hope it hasnt been abandoned cause it is the best fic for this pairing I've ever read. Plus that cliffhanger is just evvviiilllll. *sends inspiration glitter your way* hope to see more :)
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