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Reviews for Sexual Intercourse

By : Robofetus
  • From ANON - Tricycle on June 07, 2005
    this was absolutely fantastic.
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  • From ANON - k on May 24, 2005
    I adore this.
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  • From ANON - Metranome on May 02, 2005
    I've read quite a few of your fics by now, and they're all wonderfully written. I don't use this word often, but the way you write the characters is beautiful. I look forward to reading more of your work. :)
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  • From Quirk on April 15, 2005
    That was really good, though I found Naruto's actions and reactions unexpected. I like!
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  • From ANON - Demon on March 02, 2005
    awwwwww this is so sweet and i love it ^.^
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on February 14, 2005
    ...Ho-ly SHIT!!! O.O That was...was.....just........ *bends over to retrieve her jaw from where it hit the floor* .....wow. Yeah....that was.... totally awesome...... ^^;; I loves the way you had it in Sasuke's POV........the way you portrayed his thoughts added alot to the story, and was very realistic, too....... Hell, the whole damn story rocked!!! Kewlness factor of about 11 (out of 10), and completely H-A-W-T hawt!!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!!!
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  • From ANON - GreenLady on August 29, 2004
    Now how did I miss this story? It's awesome, a PWP, in the true sense of the word, but somehow its more than that. It's smartly written, and your descriptions and comparisons are just amazing. Plus . . . hot. Very hot. You should write more. Really. As often as possible.
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on July 05, 2004
    Ohh I wonder what's gonna happen when they wake up. Very nice.
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  • From ANON - Archeeka on June 29, 2004
    You know, several months ago, I printed this out and used it as turn on material--and it's effects haven't diminished since the first time I've used it. And then I realized that I had totally forgotten to review your work, even while I was using it to feed my horny so many times. Well written, racey, and arousing this fanfiction is, and I thank you for writing it. *bows*
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  • From ANON - Hit¨ ¨ on January 26, 2004
    Wow...
    Yum.
    More!!!


    Ja ne~
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  • From sourgrape on April 27, 2004
    ABSO-FUCKIN-LUTELY AMAZING! I just love how its got this Sasuke-ish seriousness to it. I LOVE how it ends. They're so in character that it's amazingly impossible. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - k-la on February 13, 2004
    i love this...and i dont really know why..gues cause it can really turn people on...anyways i love it ^_^ and hope u do one on kaka/iru...^_^ anyways awsome ....scene ^_^
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  • From on January 24, 2004
    Oh mah goodness. This is perfect. I love how Sasuke is just so /baffled/, how he describes naughty bits and naughty actions so clinically -- that's Sasuke for you. You've got the characterizations perfect. I'm so glad I'm not the only one who sees Naruto as seme! Thank you for writing -- I'm definitely off to go read your other stories.
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  • From ANON - Saphire&MMTPX on January 10, 2004
    This.. was so well written. I liked it and it made my heart race.
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  • From ANON - Naruke and Shikamaru on December 24, 2003
    Naruke: Well, that was interesting!
    Shikamaru: Yeah, an abstract lemon in first person...not bad!
    Naruke: Yeah, coz most of the first person lemons are really crappy, and are just...well, lacking, ya know what I mean?
    Shikamaru: Basically, *gets tears in his eyes* YOU 1ST PERSON LEMON RISES ABOVE ALL THE OTHERS!!!!

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