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Reviews for Sexual Intercourse

By : Robofetus
  • From lara5170 on September 28, 2016

    Isn't Sasuke curious about how Naruto knew what to do or why he head lube in his drawer by the bed? Kind of funny, sly fox


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  • From roelyrodriguez1 on March 08, 2008
    very hot

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  • From ANON - dangerprawn on January 11, 2007
    Sweet. Lord. You're awesome. I love it. I'm awestruck.
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  • From DemonBlaze on August 19, 2006
    That was great.
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  • From ANON - moonflower on December 29, 2005
    dude that was hot but u should of had it so they said the word love or will u be my boyfriend but
    great fic i loved it hope yah right more
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  • From ANON - Lyndsay-Marie (too lazy to sign in) on December 27, 2005
    That was great ^^ I loved how absolutely cuuuute it was :)

    ~Lyndsay-Marie
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  • From ANON - sutashii on December 10, 2005
    ohhh I like! Very good!
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  • From on November 22, 2005
    Hey, there, you really got Sasuke dead on, but Naruto's personality needs a little work... (Sound familliar?) Regaurdless, I still loved it, and I'm still your biggest fan! I love you, Mel.
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  • From ANON - Lydia on October 31, 2005
    Thank you for writing that! It was very well done - I don't think there was any mistakes in the first person or the tenses. Most other writers who attempt this seem to mess it up somewhere. It all flowed well too - not stilted or jumpy.

    Did he heal the split lip? Was that what started it? You never said.

    Thankyou again
    Lydia
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  • From yousieamalakasai on October 16, 2005
    Well written--why don't you write a sequel to it ???
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  • From ANON - Mercedes on September 06, 2005
    Don't take this the wrong way, but for the first third of this fic I completely forgot who you were writing about. *L* For some reason, I was reading it with Ichigo and Ishida from Bleach in mind, though the characterization didn't seem quite right. Then I hit the word "kunai" and I was so startled I had to go reread the last few paragraphs. *L*

    Interesting style. You really get across just how startled and confused, yet accepting, Sasuke is. Very well described; I can picture it happening just like that. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Eye of Aurora (too lazy to signin) on September 04, 2005
    Wow...I must say I chuckled a little at the title...and I haven't been with much hope lately at a lot of the crap people have been sudmitting on this site...but this was fucking awesome. Relatively in character, very well written, and with something very original. A lot of the ways you described things, their movements, Naruto's initiation of everything and Sasuke's reaction, the way they both came, were all a bit different from the usual cliche yaoi lemons and I was most impressed and relieved to read something like this. Absolutely wonderful and completely hot. Fantastic job! Keep it up. I really enjoyed this. Well done.
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  • From ANON - Still Me on July 23, 2005
    Christ. You have just been elevated to the position of my favorite net-author EVER! Read one of your other stories too and you rock my face off. *cries in hopeless adoration* I am building you a shrine. I swear. I guess you prolly have heard this a thousand times (maybe it even gets old) but you are an awesome writer.
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  • From ANON - Wari on July 18, 2005
    WOW.....that's all I can say....WOW
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  • From ANON - Klay on June 18, 2005
    Wow that was so good!!! Your so talented , I'm jelous! lol Write more stories like this , I love it!!
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