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By : DevilnBlue
  • From ANON - Toonage on January 31, 2009
    I think your story is going wonderfully. It might not be getting reviewed because the number of chapters has become stagnant so people might skip it over? Your revisions have made a big difference, keep it up!
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  • From tszuke on January 31, 2009
    I like this story, I wish you would continue!!!^^
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on January 31, 2009
    i notice that a didn't put a little note on the end of my review for this story. i'm looking forward to seeing their family life and itachi's reaction when he finds out about naru and it may or may not change his opinion of him.
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on January 31, 2009
    Hello there, my dear. I just want to let you know that your fics are great and I'm sorry to hear that they weren't receiving the attention the attention that they greatly deserve. Those of us that have read your stories are eagerly awaiting your next update(s). I, personally, have a book that I use to keep track of my favorite fics on this site. 4 of your fics are already in there and even though 2 of them haven't been touch in over 3 months I refuse to take them out because the story was that good.

    Most of these stories I read from my phone during a lunch break and either work or school so I don't always have a chance to sit and give you a well thought out review. I could always send one that says "nice job. please update soon" but I don't think that would be as appreciated as a review that asks questions, guesses as to what's gonna happen next and really lets you know that the reader is into your fic.

    Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that there is somebody out there enjoying your work and would love for you to continue them. I will be posting this on every fic that I have read by you and hope that it will inspire you, if only a little bit, to feed your poor yaoi fangirls a little more. Hopefully, some of your other readers will see this review and do the same. Looking forward to your next updates, whenever that may be.

    ~Devious
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  • From ANON - CrystalPrison on January 30, 2009
    NO! Don't put this story on hold...or delete it...its really good...if you delete it, that would seriously suck....you've got talent.
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  • From ANON - Poptart on January 30, 2009
    Noooo! I Love This Story So Much So Far!
    Please Update again. No Delete!!! 0.0
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  • From ANON - Lack_Honesty on January 30, 2009
    Only a threath like dropping this project could make me stop the lurking into reviewing. Therefore I beg of you to please continue this story, I wish to see how Itachi uses Naruto's powers, how he continues to defy his clan and the entire village, hopefully this wont end in the massacre of the Uchihas, mainly because it'll probaby cause a major guilt complex in Naruto, and not because of any consideration to the clan. I wish to see Naruto going to the Academy and how he adapts to his pet role, future encounters with bullying grown ups and kids alike could show the protective side of Itachi, if only to protect his posession, as a matter of pride.
    I HOPE THIS IS PROOF ENOUGH OF PEOPLE PAYING ATTENTION TO YOUR WARNINGS FOR YOU TO CONTINUE THIS FANFIC, if not I could become a more obsessive fan, the stalking kind that continues to ask for updates on a weekly basis and rants endlessly, your choice.
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  • From CelticWarrior on January 30, 2009
    Please update :P Its a good story and as its just developing could head into many different directions^^
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  • From MasterofPie on December 23, 2008
    that was freaking awsome!
    Can't wait to see what happens ^__^
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  • From serenagold on December 20, 2008
    Great chapter! I really love this story and its so artfully done too.

    I just kept thinking to myself that Sasuke's going to be so jealous and angry with Naruto once he finds out that his big brother, whom he worships and adores and is way too busy to spend time with him, will now be training the village's blonde monster instead of him. Oh the rivalry!

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From mistressofyaoi on December 19, 2008
    i really like this story i look forward to seeing where you go with this, and i love the young kakashi *swoons*
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  • From BlackSandGara on October 20, 2008
    Woot! Another chapter! Sorry about the late review I’ve been swamped with work and I wanted to make sure that when I did review I had a full review and not a half ass one.

    First I’m so excited that you updated! I thought it was going to be a lost cause to send in that review but I was thought you never know until you try and now you have updated!

    Poor Sasuke he got left out while little Naruto can’t believe someone is actually stopping the villagers. With only a glare, rock on Itachi. I was a little confused on the time flow of the chapter but I think over all I understood it. So now Itachi and Naruto are living in their own house that is on the outskirts of the Uchiha villa and that is where you started was with Naruto in Itachi’s new room watching him them falling asleep. And the flash back was into the past looping around to the start of the chapter.

    I love the fact that all Itachi does really is train, eat a little, and then puts up with a team for as little as possible. You also had an interesting relationship between Fugaku and Mikoto loving but not on equal levels. I wonder what Itachi is going to do when he finds out. Hmm… why did he never just ask some drunk guy?

    Man I just can’t wait to see where all of this goes. I hope it turns go ok for Naruto. Oooh maybe instead of Sasuke getting hurt triggering the Kyuubi coming out it would be because of Itachi getting hurt on a mission or something.

    Thank you for continuing this story! I hope you love it as much as I love to read it!!

    ~The Black Sand of Gara

    P.S. I think you are doing a great job on showing how Itachi would be as a child.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on October 19, 2008
    I like the way you have portrayed Itachi and can't wait till you update. What you have written so far is freakin' amazing.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - animelover on October 17, 2008
    OMG!!! What an unbelievable fic! lovin' it ... totally! go itachi!
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  • From ItaNarulover on October 17, 2008
    Thanks for updating! I've been waiting for it with eagerness!
    I really loved the first chapter, and I loved the second as well. Keep it up! ;P
    Naruto is so cute in this fic and I feel so sorry for him, good thing Itachi's there to protect him. I know Itachi's really a genius and all but I find him acting too "old" for a 9 year old, like his speech, he talks as if he were older, the fancy words and all. It doesn't bother me that much, it just sparked my attention. Maybe he's supposed to do that? It doesn't matter, it's great anyway!
    I really liked the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto and I hope that they will meet several times. They're both so cute! Kawaii!!
    So thanks for making this fic! I can't wait for the next chapter.
    Good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs


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