Click Here!

Reviews for Broken

By : DevilnBlue
  • From TimePiece02 on August 09, 2016

    That was odd but keep going the story is pretty interesting.


    Report Review

  • From RukiRomance on June 11, 2013
    OOH! I like where this is going!
    Will there be more?
    Oh I hope there will be more soon!~


    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jorge on September 23, 2012
    I love the new chapter please keep updating please!!!! I have to say I'm addicted to this story now
    Report Review

  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on January 16, 2010
    Hello, I would greatly appreciate if you would update this story please. I really like it and want to know more of what is to come from Itachi to Naruto
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Ty on December 25, 2009
    I'm entranced by this story. Not only do I like the needy, dependent Naruto who laps up any attention he is given, I'm loving the both heartless and merciful Itachi. I'm intrigued by how Itachi is so confused about whether he wants to see Naruto broken before him or if he wants to keep him as a pet. I also like this because it's how Itachi sees things and you put alot of thought into his emotions and most other just tend to make him bland, boring, and too stoic to connect with. I'm truly interested in knowing how the story progresses and am looking forward to the next chapter. ^^
    Report Review

  • From mercynre on November 21, 2009
    This is such a cute story (am I twisted for thinking that?) and I want to read the rest of it. Poor Naruto... and it's so interesting to see Itachi from a new point of view, since so little is really said about him in the anime other than facts. I like that you explore the way he thinks and the things that make him who he is rather than just the actions; it's something I wish would happen in the show. And it was very cute and canon the way that Sasuke and Naruto checked each other out when they met, as if they were always meant to compete.
    Report Review

  • From Animehedonist on August 29, 2009
    Very fascinating chapter I kind of enjoy that Itachi is on a team with more women than men and how Anko is with him. It's very fun. It's a very fascinating chapter in terms Of Sasuke and Naruto interacting as well. The quotes at the beginning of the chapters also are fascinating and good quotes it's interesting to see where this story is going keep up the good work.
    Report Review

  • From serenagold on July 09, 2009
    Yay!! Its back!!

    I love this story and I'm glad to see it updating again. I love Sasuke's confrontation of Naruto.
    Keep up the great work!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lack_Honesty on July 08, 2009
    What interests me most from this fic is Itachi's inner struggle of wanting to break Naruto though he can't help but feel some sort of guilt for it, that feeling of wanting to know how far he can go causing pain for the sheer pleasure of it, yearning for those tears only to be able to give comfort, poor Itachi needs to reconsider his actions before he does something he can't undo. I just love how Naruto takes his position as pet, his fear of being eventually abandoned by Itachi makes me wonder how far he will go to ensure a little affection from his master, could he eventually attack others under the idea that they potentially endanger his link with Itachi (like Sasuke and his agreement of sorts to share his aniki), I think he will eventually stand up to others, maybe he will even develop a sick attachment to Itachi a possessiveness that will make him view others as rivals or something. Now, the way in which Itachi finally finds out the truth about Naruto is very unexpected, though I don’t know if he will remember after all the alcohol, fortunately he has Naruto to watch over him in his hang over. I wish to read more about the interaction of Itachi and his team, and the eventual baby-sitting done by Kakashi when Itachi's on a mission, I can just picture the way Itachi reconsiders leaving impressionable Naruto with porn reading Kakashi when faced with a series of questions about that orange book he carries around.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Elin on July 04, 2009
    Awesome, awesome, awesome!

    Don't take it away! It's interesting to read something so well-written and something that isn't all mush or unrealistic drama. I like Itachi's dark side, and I'm looking forward to see how this continues!
    Report Review

  • From sobakasuchan on July 03, 2009
    thanks for another good chapter, i cant believe you got Itachi drunk X0 haha!
    and i cant wait to see what Sasuke's idea of greeting Itachi is, oh the suspense!
    update soon please =D
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Emma345 on February 09, 2009
    SUPERB! keep it up
    Report Review

  • From DarkStarrNinja on February 09, 2009
    I love this story a lot please don't take it down!?!?
    Report Review

  • From ZenithB on February 01, 2009
    I like it so far. Interesting take on the ita/naru theme. I'd like to read more.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2009
    please keep thease storys that you created i like then and wish you would continue them.
    so please dont abandon them.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!